Friday, July 8, 2011

Friday On Friday - "Unlicensed... Poetic"

The bloody awful poet is back.


LOVE overcomes the changes we make
The wrongs that we do
And the chances we take
The wind and the rain and the hearts that we break
In the silence... of our voices.

HATE underscores the hits that we take
The fights that we lose
And the faith we forsake
The grey rolling fog through the souls that we take
In the silence... of our choices.

HOPE overrides the lines that we fake
The people we use
And then leave in our wake
The good that we don’t and the bad that we do
In the silence...

6 comments:

  1. Doh! Where's the last line!! :)

    Beautiful, Bill, with a wonderful lilt. It gave me a soft, melancholy smile.

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  2. Doh! Where's the last line!! ;)

    Beautiful, Bill, with a wonderful lilt. It gave me a soft, melancholy smile.

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  3. Very realistic and exactly how true life is.

    Well said.

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  4. Beautiful. What a perfect start to my day, thanks for sharing!

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  5. Lovely, very nice poem. Love the ending

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  6. Are you Irish? This has the Irish lilt. Nice, BF. KTG

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